Heart attack handing in doubt- Melissa Gilpin
Tuesday, October 26, 2004
Melissa Gilpin
Grade: 8
Teacher: Miss Hessian
Review about article
When was this article published? Tuesday, September 21, 2004
Where was it published? Montreal, Quebec Canada
Who did this article: Sharon Kirkey (canwest news service).
The title of this article: Heart attack handing in doubt
Newspaper: Gazette
How this article in the newspaper is talking about science: This article is describing the word science in many different ways because; it’s about the heart which is a body part that helps you live. The people who have heart attacks are usually taken to the hospital, where the doctors help them and get them breathing again. That’s why this news article is describing the word science.
What is this article about: The article is about hearts attacks. A lot people may cost there lives of heart attacks each year, around the world. American’s were 3 times likely to die of heart attacks then Canadians. The original study of 41,000 patients looked at one year survival rates. All people who had heart attacks suffered really badly, caused by an obstruction of one of the three important coronary arteries- which is a type of heart attack that accounts for about one-third of all “myocardial infarctions”.
What the author talks about in the article: The author is saying that Canadians are significantly less likely than the U.S patients to be alive five years after a heart attack. What the author is saying isn’t true because, my joomshoom (grandpa) is still alive when he had his heart attack. It all started when it was in the middle of the winter. My grandpa went to go cut some wood for the house, so he didn’t have to buy fuel for the house. He drove his ski-doo to go get the fire wood. He was carrying a lot of firewood. Then all of a sudden he clasped. Luckily someone came and found him, and the people rushed him to the airport going the flight going to Montreal. He is still alive all thou the doctor’s have a battery in his heart, to help him live his life. My grandfather has to go to Montreal often to change his battery, before it runs out. My grandfather is somewhere in his seventies and his still alive from his heart attack.
Why I think this issue is important to me and to other people: I think this issue is really important to read. It’s taking about heart attacks and also Americans and Canadians who have had heart attacks, also they talk about the types of heart attacks there are. The issue is very I important to read. I didn’t know that this article would have something to do with science, and many more subject for instant math is a big part of this article. I didn’t know doing something with a newspaper would be so fun.
posted by E.Hessian @ 10:05 a.m.
9 Comments:
My comments on Melissa’s article which was about heart attacks. The heart is an important part that is in our body. A lot of people around the world have heart attack each year. Some may be hospitalized. She also mentioned a story that was about her grandpa who had a heart attack. But now she said that his grandpa wears a battery in his stomach.
Most people need a battery in their stomach to help their heart beat normal. I thought that the article she did had some science to do on the human heart because that’s the main thing we need in our body to live. I think that some people may damage their hearts by smoking, drugs, and other stuff that are wrong.
The article she wrote about described the word science in many different ways. People who have heart attacks are usually taken to the hospital to get them breathing again. My own grandpa Joe had a heart attack once when he was in the highway where his camp was, he lived near a town it was about 80km away. He drove himself all the way to Matagami, and after that he was driven by an ambulance to another town.
Melissa’s article review is the most important thing in our life which we are afraid in heart attack. Heart is a part of our body that’s why we can stay alive by heart bear, no heart beat, not alive. People who have the heart attack should go to hospital by immovable time when doctor tell you to go, because the heart attack could happen by anytime. It’s really dangerous. I’m afraid of having that!!
Having heart attack is really horrible, you can’t do something excite and the foods have to be good to healthy. I think this is the worst thing in the world. Many old people have heart attack because they can’t resist the virus coming from them. Actually not everyone can stop the heart attack, some people who have weak body can’t prevent the attack and the doctor can’t help them either sometimes. Heart attack is the most dangerous symptom to people because you have no chance to stay for long time.
We should be serious on this symptom because if most people having this symptom, they can’t do anything for this, just give them some medicine to suppress for a while. The doctor should think some method to really prevent the heart attack again and again invade people’s heart. Save the people’s life and defeat the virus, the heart attack!! This is what I thought about the heart attack.
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By: Jeffery Cowen
I found this review very interesting and informative. The grammer at the biginning lacked a little but at the end it greatly improved. I liked how she brought the story back to her life and made it a little more personalized. My grandfather is also on a pace-maker. Although he didn't have a heart attack.
By: Jeffery Cowen
I found this review very interesting and informative. The grammer at the biginning lacked a little but at the end it greatly improved. I liked how she brought the story back to her life and made it a little more personalized. My grandfather is also on a pace-maker. Although he didn't have a heart attack.
I liked the review i found it made sense. It had a good layout, as in beginning, middle, end. As i said the bigginings grammer lacked a little but all in all was fine.
The review was very well set up, had a good beginning,middle and end and made sense and was personalized so overall i would highly rate this review.
Krista said...
The article Melissa chose which was about heart attacks, it is important to know what are the causes from having a heart attack. Since the heart is an important part that is in our body. A lot of people around the world have heart attack each year. Some may be hospitalized. She also mentioned a story that was about her grandpa who had a heart attack. But now she said that his grandpa wears a battery in his stomach.
Most people need a battery in their stomach to help their heart beat normal. I thought that the article she did had science to do; the human heart was the main thing that was about science. We need a heart in our body to live. I think that some people may damage their hearts by smoking, drugs, and other stuff that are wrong.
The article she wrote about described the word science in many different ways. People who have heart attacks are usually taken to the hospital to get them breathing again. Many people can have heart attacks anywhere at anytime.
This was very very good! I think that yet this was the best one best because the beggining was very good and that the way that every parragraphe say what its talking about.
Ex: the second Parragraphe it says What is the artical about, and then it goes on.....
Ex: other one that says What does author say about this or something like and then goes on.....
I really loved it and the interract part was really true.
Good Job Melissa!!!!!!!!!!
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